birdsong through a window
A contest entry
- Another of those four words contests by agilejill.
300 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
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Gorgeous
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Thanks
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OOH, this goes deeps
Wow, I can see many paths of comprehension. One can offer why Winter seems to be hanging onto Spring still, and yet it's the season. Or, a small feathered one you'd like to discover when looking out even though it may not be that high-pitched, and yet your centered focus is. That would be very amusing as well as involved. But, sadness could interfere the subject with either distractions, too much of other noises, or a dying one. All of it comes down to that I think you like to ponder, nevertheless the circumstances for these words.
I am impressed by how this is to the point, thanks for entering,
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A beautiful thought. No noisy, no chaos...only bird's songs...
But if we listen to birds singing at 5 am, it won't be so nice and quiet ... It happens to me on Summer's days!
Greetings,
Jasmine
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Excellent
Such a sweet take on this prompt. Beautiful job
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