Hearts Wither Without Another
A contest entry
- Another of those four words contests by agilejill.
300 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Right along with how we were created
This is not surprising, yet it is something to be grateful about that we even have the capabilities to keep reinvigorating each other. Stimulation back and forth is like part of our diet so to speak, including everything else that we need both literally and figuratively. And, because of that, this poem may be hinting not seeing a dear one for long, or any of that sort. You leave a course of guessing which is fine here, still with the same lead.
Precisely I smile, thanks for entering,
~agilejill~ -
Good. I agree with your use of hearts!!
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well done. great meaning behind the words. i'd go with "Heart Withers Without Another" instead of "hearts" but well done.
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I stayed away from that because then it seems the line would need to be "A heart withers without another"
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