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My Cracked Mask

I cry when no ones looking

hiding behind closed doors

I hide behind a mask all day
Emotions held in my Core

But when I crawl inside my bed
exausted, unhappy, and worn
I feel the emotons I held back
Slowly start to pour

It doesnt stop until morning
by then I'm cold and sore
Then I start to pick the broken pieces up
Each one that was torn

To form again my mask
That goes on my face once more
I will only truely stop when
I find something worth living for

Author notes

Yeah I wrote this when I realized I was doing this

So my first posted poem....what do you think?

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  • queen Greeters member
    May 12

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    WELCOME TO ALL POETRY

    This is an amazing poem, keep writing what you feel, you have got some great talent

    Barbara
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  • fantasylandthinker01
    May 9
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    my actions/feelings into words thanx... by the way great poem

  • xXcrazychristinaXx
    May 8

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    aww i have done this b4. i built up a wall and not let anyone see my true emotions and my feelings. id hide behind a mask everyday. this is powerful and i really like it.
    good job
    christina

  • poetboi
    May 8
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    Well

    This is a great poem
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