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Tamed

I am aware of his eyes, they are watching,

Why is he observing and why choose me?

At His bidding I am played and catching

Not once his gaze, as His will it must be.

 

Not able to hide, all at his command,

On fours crawling, begging desire to please.

A sexual play thing, at His sole demand.

Tamed by kneeling on rice and the iced freeze.

 

 

The scars of his lash vibrant on my back,

Each one His mark of my own disrespect.

His teaching through pain all the skills I lack,

For Him my own will I must disconnect.

 

A girl trained to be Master’s slave of lust,

Obedience is all, His need I trust.

Author notes

Yeah dream on, dream on not in a million years!!!!
An no I am not lower casing the 'I'.

word prompt: obedience

artwork: Luis Royo

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  • sunnystream
    September 3

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    This is sweet. I say that because I think the feelings are coming from a sweet place. The place where the little girl in all of us lies. Is that crazy? I like it.


  • Tattboyspet
    May 15, 2008

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    DAMN GIRL!!!!!!! You SURE you weren't a sub in a previous life?! o-O
    hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!
    EXCELLENT take on the picture my friend! You have DEFNITELY got it in a nutshell!


    • Corvus Corone
      May 15, 2008

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      To be honest writing 'sub' is easy as go for what I like to see, whereas writing 'Dom' is opening up myself which is something I am not that good at.