Retaliate predators
disturbing dreams.
When I fantasize
I
am
Unimpeded .
Author notes
Prompt -
But my dreams they aren't as empty
As my conscience seems to be
I have hours, only lonely
My love is vengeance
That's never free "
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A contest entry
- Unsignes Quickie ~ 10 word quickie by Unsigned.
450 points, ended May 8, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great write!
and congrats on placing
ive never won...*sigh*
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Excellent once again. I would not have been able to write with so few words on such a horrible nightmare of a dream. You did an excellent job once again. Thank you for sharing.
Much Love
Your Aunty
Kelle
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Thanks darl
I struggled but broke through in the end...it's all practice...it's all growth
lol
Cin
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Yes so am I .....Interesting first four words...really made me think.
Love the ending. Love the shape. Love all of it.
Preditor here???? gotta give that soe thought!
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and you can either choose to string it as one thought..and have it as two seperate thoughts. those first four etc
Funny , I struggled at first..with the prompt, then those four words came, then the rest..and I felt relieved lol
Thanks for a great contest
Cindy
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That's my clever girl *puffs out chest proudly*
Bugger, I shouldn't do that...hehehe
It was wonderful honey
Love you
Mum 
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Wicked sis!!! Wow.. what an amazing take on this prompt!! We have all seen different things in it... fantastic!!
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oh god, i think its crappers hahaha.
but its what came from the prompt, so yeah
Thanx SiS
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Excellent take on this. Well said! Best of luck to you
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Thank you
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