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My religion------------------

strong belief in GOD

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Another of those four words contests

A contest entry

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  • agilejill
    May 12, 2008
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    This is different, so I have to comment again

    I'm glad you took the account of realization to always put God first even if he were already in your mind a little. Really emphasizes that, to pick this topic for four words. And, the poem part is basic without getting too detailed spiritual, except the title speaks a little heavier which doesn't match.

    Kindled an opinion, Thank you for your entry,
    ~agilejill~


  • agilejill
    May 10, 2008

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    Well...

    I am not sure if this would go too far on my spiritual rule; in a discussion of great commandments, I credit: "The second, like it, is this, ‘You must love your neighbor as yourself'" (Mathew 22:39,) and so there is a higher one being that we can't leave God out.

    If you are interested in modifying this, I will leave it up to how much you think of this poem with guideline #3.

    ~agilejill~