The look through her eyes, although had given a cold shoulder,
yet i swayed in the dream of heaven, smiled not knowing how when or why..
hand i straight off placed on my heart, this's no lie
Deep within, i imagined comfort conquering each grief that were to be my fate,
peacefully in the fields of heaven as though I had laid. .. .
Like I looked away when you turned about and left,
As if, i had become cold enough to see you go,
as if, i hadn't loved you, and each word you had said,
I stood there staring, waiting, wanting you to turn,
But neither a word did the soul utter,
it remained silent watching the scene - suppressing my actions
i let it be, it was a moment of silence, i had all of it, each bit of it. ..
There was no disappointment at all that I had,
clear picture was brought about me and since i smiled back
I was strong enough to resist the pain, to dwell in a moment of silence
nobody assuaged my sorrows, i dealt all alone, and i made thru it[i guess]
yes i did, i survived, moment of silence had it all
it was not much, but enough of all
sparkle in her cold eyes carried it all, silently, said it all.. .
Mansoor A.
Author notes
The story goes like theres some guy, for instance, in this place, it's "me". I get to look thru a girl's eye who i regard very special *sighs* She looks when i look, this period is hardly about a second or two. But . .. but She turns about and walks away.. And in the second stanza "me" confronts and tells i wasn't too rude that i would walk away, i stood there waiting for you to turn. And When u watched me looking at you, there was a slight unidentified smile, which she probably felt somewhere. But since she said nothing and turned about to leave, i was very strong to resist all of it because she spoke nothing but silence.. But that Moment of Silence was the most important which was of about a second or two, i had already seen a beautiful sparkle twinkling in her eyes although her face seemed stern and rough enough, and that sparkle had a message concealed/hidden. And the moment of silence carried it and i heard it, and undoubtedly whispered it all in my ear.
Feel while you read it, and express how you feel. . ..
Comments
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hmmm...awesome..
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Beautiful tradgity
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thankyou so much, also because its the first comment to this poem
love xx
Mansoor
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