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Four Words

Energetic, Easy, carefree, Fun

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4 words

A contest entry

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  • jackreed3 gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Sounds a little like me...
    Thank you for your nice comment...
    your friend in Poetry... JackReed3


  • agilejill
    May 11, 2008
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    It raises my good spirits with your edit

    These words now give me a little stable list of a day to be talked about. However, I have to imagine what this refers to specifically because it doesn't anywhere suggest of what you're speaking of completely (i.e. if you had "swing" somewhere, it would let me go through that laughter.) NOTE, no more work needs to be done to stay in my contest. A lot of things do qualify this kind of description, like innocence of childhood for example, you don't have to tell them to run as they begin on their own with proper environment. I have a close connection with my mamma and I briefly talking about this concept yesterday or so...

    A nice outline-- so thank you for entering and not removing!
    ~agilejill~


  • agilejill
    May 10, 2008
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    i thought my contest was clear with the first rule to keep it clean...

    please try to change your idea before i comment on the last entry. so, i now take this needed edit like a reserved spot; if not revised before my other reviews are in i will have to remove it so i can judge.

    thank you for your understanding with a basic girl,
    ~agilejill~


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 9, 2008

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    You pull no punches, do you? hahahaha this works for melol good luck in the contest