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It Was Easy With You

Everything came so easy with you,

I could talk without worry,

I could say what was on my mind,

I could tell my secrets,

it was that easy.

 

Everything was so simple with you,

hands would be held together,

eyes would meet,

lips would touch,

it was that simple.

 

Everything was just natural with you,

happiness,

love,

trust,

it was that natural.

 

Now it's all gone,

and again

I'm removed,

it's no more

and I'm all alone.

 

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I miss her so much it still hurts

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  • Pretty Girl
    March 2

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    Beautiful

    I feel all of the love in this write. I love the part eyes would meet, lips would touch, it was that simple. That is awesome. I am sorry that you hurt so much, I understand what it feels like. Now your left with a whole in your heart that will never go away. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us.


  • poet girl
    December 21, 2008

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    This is such a simply put, wonderful poem. It is simple but so full of meaning. Wonderful, pen on...


  • KelsBabez
    June 19, 2008
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    Your writing is amazing,
    with some people things are just beautiful
    safe and free. It seemed a little awkward when you came to your last free lines. It hurts when you lose people
    this writing is easy to relate to cause everyone has had it happened to them in sometime in there life.


  • StarrieNacht
    May 25, 2008

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    Beautifully collected and to the point.
    Loneliness is a hard emotion to beat and wrap your head around no matter who you are.
    Missing someone is something inside without words that can be woken from a slumber and brought forth to live until time passes to slow that pain down to the point where you can breathe steady and smile happily as yourself; a whole.
    Thank you for sharing this piece.


  • Alittle2lost
    May 14, 2008

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    I'm so sorry... that's awful... i know that feeling, and as much as you may not want to hear it.. it eases up after a while...
    and as i've always said, and you've proven here, some of the best writing comes from some of the worst places.


  • Quill
    May 8, 2008
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    I know it's easy for others to say, but it is true time is a great healer.

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