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Compromising Serenity

Please don’t walk away
Fear can only be embraced
Higher than the highest road
This cliff top brings with me Serenity

A peace to change what can not
A pain to feel what can be
The way you touch me causes this
And tonight, we can say it’s our time

Whispered voices I may hear
Promises thrown into the wind
The wild lashing at my eyes
And the hope that you are near

And the wolfs eyes stay watchful
In an ever haunting gaze
The lock of love is passed tonight
A secret from the future



Way above the sea tonight

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  • Haunted Doll
    May 15, 2008
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    elegant and beautiful to sum it up. nicely done.


  • Somebody-New
    May 9, 2008

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    wow kasey this is awesome...very hauntingly beautiful... sadly i know (sorta) where your mind was at when you wrote this...and let me just say, you're thoughts of pure insanity produce some pretty fine works. loving this new writing you girl, please keep it up and give me more! (oh God yes, more MORE!!!)
    loves
    xoxo


  • LIL Manga Girl 14
    May 8, 2008
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    cool

    wow thats real good i like it