Watching another sunrise
With these bloodshot eyes
Feeling dawns temptation
Drowning out the night
Suffocates the starlight
Bleeds its shamefull lies
Severs contemplation
Pierced by beams of light
colour dark sensations
Palet of the sky
Taint me viscious circle
Turn me inside out
Trap me in eternal
Never feeling right
Pull me through your framework
Watch my dreams ignite
As another day quickly begins
To drag me into sunlight!
Author notes
Just as i was up all night again!
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Comments
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very nice the way the reader can share the experience and feelings as if through the writer's eyes...ver well done...PK
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