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In your Eyes

In your eyes I can see
A person I want to be
In your arms I can feel
A love genuine and real

Our hands locked together
Our hearts entwined forever
A promise from deep inside
A dream that had never died

To love you and only you
Tho' distance keeps us so
People go, time pass
But my love will always last

Believe, never forget
These feelings we have felt
Things may all fade away
But in my heart love will stay

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A poem out of the blue..^^ for a friend of mine..

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  • james119
    May 11, 2008

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    nice work
    I can see high caliber thought in these lines:
    In your eyes I can see
    A person I want to be