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sounds of a toilet

(this is the weird friend again... not skatrboi.)


Spliosh
Plop
PSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Plish
Plash
Plosh
Fluuuuuuuuuusssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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  • Barry Hodges silver member
    September 5

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    I can indeed see why you have adopted the pen name (or nom de plume as we sophistates prefer) of "Confused". I notice that this "poem" was written 15 months ago and this is its first comment. I think that says a lot.