Iceilica,
Her crystal sapphire tail ploughing up and down behind her.
I'm waiting,
All alone on the rusty pier,
I know she will come.
Twenty minutes,
She should be here,
To witness this,
She jumped,
Doing a single backflip,
Gazing at the stars.
I'm excited,
Jumping up and down
And...
I've done it,
I'm one of them,
I'm a mer.
A mer?
I used to be...
I don't want to...
I miss my family...
How could I be...
Doesn't matter.
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A contest entry
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I really like it!! Is it based on the book ingo?
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Cool!
I love the theme!
Wow, you've entered all the maximum amount of poems allowed in my contest! Reallu, really good! Keep up the good work!
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