There is a silver lining waiting in the cloud of dreams
With positive emotion she will soothe with gentle beams
To shine upon dark waters and reflect a new born light
So sit with her this evening and then tell her of your plight.
She sits so high above you and she tells you to release,
All negative reactions and for once sit there in peace
She'll scatter you with stardust and create a magic spell
To wrap you in her blanket that will show that all is well.
Look up to see her smiling as she bathes in silver hue
She's waiting for the moment that you realise what's true
Acknowledge all around you as she gives you second sight
The magic of the Silver Moon has rescued you tonight.
A contest entry
- Magic in the Silver Moon by Lone Defender.
500 points, ended May 19, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very lovely words. Thank you for entering.
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lovely
ros this is so very well written a pleasure to read another one of your wonderful poems god bless n happy mothers day
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Well versed piece on Lunar magic. The moody temptress does indeed have a compassionate soul.Nice sooth in reading positive composition.
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Excellent !
I really love this poem alot.Also the wayit has such a rhymatic rhyme to it as a whole and just not part of it!I also mostly love the way you ended it as well. The Magic of the Silver Moon has rescued you tonight.That is a wonderful ending to a really good poem. One that was such a delight to read.Also the way you made all of your words stay togeather.Wonderfully Written!It also makes me think of Earth,Air,Wind,andFire As well as North,South,East and West.One of those fairy tale's that njust sweep you off your feet! Brenda Gae
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Delightful
I always smile when I read one of your fine pieces of poetry for tey are so upbest and enlightening. Keep them coming Ros for AP needs the sunshine
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I love this poem thank you
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o the moon and the magic of the yin and yang, how it washes the soul and centres the mind and spirit, how it ever dreamful inspires us to intuition and send so prayers of timing love and dreams, yes your magic is a wonder to read especially at this time of night when my moon is in cancer and i'm wraped up in a blanket of sickness and depression, thank you
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-JAS
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