whenever im weary from the battles of life,
from the trials and circumstances i have.
who are there to give me a helping hand?
only You my Lord are there to give me strength.
when hardships, sorrows and pain are there,
seeing You makes them fade away.
to reflect with You makes everything ease,
ease those things and turn it into happiness.
in times that i long to see Your precious face,
how i close my eyes and call Your wonderful name.
for Your image does not comes from my mind,
and its not that i imagine You infront of me.
the image that i am seeing everytime i close my eyes,
is not by creative mind but generated by my heart.
You are not infront of me all the time,
because You are within me living inside my heart.
to You i give my full faithfulness,
for You are my one and only God to provide me.
one day i will not need to close my eyes to see You,
because i will be with You and hugging You with both arms.
A contest entry
- #11 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
630 points, ended May 23, 2008, 13 entries
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Honorable mention
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As much as I enjoy reading others prayers to "their Lord" I find it does nort encapsulate the theme of this contest which is about the seasons of the earth.
There is also the fact of incorrect English in the form of Capitilisation.
As you may well feel the Lord is the most important thing within your life I am afraid capitalisation is one of the most important things in English, regardless of wether or not it is used within the same text as God "I" should always be capitalised when in the first tense,(at least thats what I was always taught) -
Ah..this is really very heartfelt..and so true..Thank you so much for sharing it..and thank you for entering in my contest...
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This cleary potrays your strong belief in the Lord...x
The title left an impression on me, though it may be a simple one. God is truly living within each & every one of us.
Thanks and best of luck
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i could put my faith in god, if i never had to except the existance a devil to do it.
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This is a very intense expression of your faith. Well written.
jjj
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hi bro!
this is my favorite one
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