Insanity
meets
brevity-
greatness.
Author notes
Title taken from the name of Theory Of A Deadmans new album.
A contest entry
- Another of those four words contests by agilejill.
300 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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True, patterned
Thank you for informing me, I agree with your reply, I just wanted to make sure lol. Looking more into this now, there could be a little contest going on between actions, and "brevity" gets rewarded the hyphen of better. Or, initially, at least if we try to trim our craziness that roars up, but then can go back down again, we can feel the smile of settlement a little. And, then that's where we want to stay put, though will go through once more, but if attempting it doesn't leave you totally helpless.
Nodding yes with your happy way of telling this, well done, thank you for entering and staying,
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My first reaction is cutting... please REPLY and let me know if I should have a better view according to my rules... then, I will re-look at this.
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Not about cutting whatsoever. Gross.
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I think instead of a comma after brevity, you could use an equal sign for fun...you know, like it's a mathematical equation...
=D Interesting choice of four words.
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