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Insurrection

Lush white petal trampled.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    Wow.. I love those four words... in their realism they are beautiful, but as a metaphor they could stand for so much!!


  • agilejill
    May 9, 2008

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    Strongly blue. could even be a metaphor

    This may be just a crush you might not usually act upon to skim off a flower, let's say accidentally though it can reflect an anger that made you get up rapidly. Maybe it interferes with a close person, now you're turning away from at least at the moment, that delicate endearment. If it isn't intended totally like you tripped, than maybe figuratively you can attempt at re-building, like a morning glory will pop back up all the way down to if you don't get the full root out.

    To ponder on carefully, thanks for entering,
    ~agilejill~