You can feel love
A contest entry
- Another of those four words contests by agilejill.
300 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This could be physical, but doesn't have to be
You can "feel" it also by the type of friendly talk you get, and the pitch of what doesn't feel worthless. That's a hint... as well as the bond between a mother and baby, if you spend time always and hold them promptly, they can't speak yet but their aggravation won't heavily show up. Extra comforted is the word with everything needed wrapped up in a song, swaddle, even a touch etc. And, coordinating with the title, I guess you can hope that someone isn't playing fake because their actions sure match what you'd like to be around, or decipher your own bounce.
Very nice and subtle presentation, thank you for entering,
~agilejill~
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