The time has come and I want nothing but for you to take control: Mind, Body, and Soul is all waiting for you. Once we have encountered the time is right for us to be with each other tonight. You have me where you want me your in control at last, for this moment in time is yours for the taken. As you stroke me the way I want you to our love grows as once again we become one with each other. As I feel your hands all over my body I know you want me like never before. Every time we touch its better then before, because you please me better then the night before. As our sex drive grows more in depth I feel the sensation of our thighs as the meet again for this feels oh so good that I don't want the night to end.
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you tried very hard. but hunny, you can do so much better. You can be more poetic. do I really have to be there half asleep for you to get your words right? sex drive sounds too bumpy for the flow of words. excasy works better. you are more of telling me what is going on, describe it dear, You have the talent to, just use it.
also this doesn't look in poem format to me. I know you can do better, but still good work
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