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  • agilejill
    May 8, 2008

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    Woah, this is emotional emphasized in a unique way, although

    Usually, these words would be pretty simple and not necessarily the funnest to comment on because it's already been used in different phrases. But, here you've made it that way by the exclusive shape, in the spread out spelling of "smiling" and "crying." It actually shows the covering easily as you speak about it, as well as literal flipped curves in position... your typing of "crying" also falls down like beginning tears. I enjoyed feeling tints of experience here.

    Thanks for giving me a new way to take in what's said and for entering,
    ~agilejill~


  • hahakindaguy
    May 8, 2008
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    The visualization is nice, but the message is even stronger, sort of reminds me of myself