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it doesn't matter


capitalized
italicized
degraded
updated
forgotten
remembered
dissuaded
convinced
expert
convict

subtle tone
turns the stone
of cliche into excrement
of a society in decay

dismay, the sour
broche worn on the breast
of heartless hordes

definition goes beyond words
it becomes the unfiltered negation
of a positively great innuendo
but steps in too many puddles
on its way

soiled he smiles
sings his songs off of a skateboard
breezing by a busy world

bees rest more often

it's 2 in the morning, and
skating is in my mind
i'm not conviced
it matters

but something must.

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  • Elenaliz
    May 9, 2008
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    im reading because i like the way you write.i really like the last three stanzas in this one.