Can you hear it?
Author notes
four words
A contest entry
- Another of those four words contests by agilejill.
300 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A very expressive piece!! I love the sounds of summer.. the breeze, the ocean...
Lovely
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This is a great write and such a deep and meaningful one with only four words. the picture is also wonderful, well done and best of luck for the contest.
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beautiful
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Hey, that graphic really dances with those four words. It makes you just go into the picture almost.
Well done
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beautiful..loovvee it!
All the best!
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Long pondering on short penning
The chirps, the water, the inside pleasure symbolically, the conversations, so much softly out of it making it worthwhile audibly. That's why I enjoy your serious mark, testing if you are totally involved in it, or only the warmth lol.
Simple, it's broken down, thank you for entering,
~agilejill~ -
Oh, what an idea--being able to "hear" a season. Nicely thought out and written.
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