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Mr. Comp And Ms. Simp

Complexity
often
woos
simplicity

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  • Re-invention silver member
    May 16, 2008
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    true. it happens at most timein life. great one! good luck!


  • forever and ever
    May 13, 2008
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    Short and too the point. very nice.

  • carole21
    May 9, 2008

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    nice

    very nice write for a very short prompt . . liked "Complexity" and "simplicity" . . good first and last lines . . well done

  • livingundead
    May 8, 2008
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    Simple, to the point and so very very true


  • individuality gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    ah yeah sweet complexity and soft simplicity, they stroll hand in hand in the garden of roses and smell the fragrance given to them, a good poem


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    This is a great write and says so much in so few words. Well done for this and all the best for the contest.


  • agilejill
    May 7, 2008

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    I see there has been tempting

    Ahhh, I like how these words roll back upon each other... how sometimes complexity seems better than simplicity, or simplicity rather than complexity under circumstances to be carefully decided. Modern days can cloud our summary of realization.

    Thanks for showing me that in a fun lil write, and for entering,
    ~agilejill~

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