i love you
i fear you
i fear love
i fear nothing
i pushed aside
what was left of me
to show
to see
to hear
to know
who i was for you
i began
i started
to fall
fall for you
fall in love
fall for love
i lost the battle
i lost the war
the battle that raged
the war fought
unshedded tears
longed for your embrace
shedded the insight
the love
i had
for you
freedom i gave
i shackle myself
i miss a love
a lover
someone like you
someone distant
so far away
yet so close
i pushed
away
from me
the love
the lover
my soul
my heart
my tears
i miss
this
love
miss
this
feeling
feeling of completion
feeling of being needed
having someone
there
someone i can talk to
to have
my words
unheard
though the words heard shouldve been silenced
i miss the boy
the man
i fell for
the lover
the rose
encased in emotions
the words
that speak
that flow
that write
the writer of my soul
the writer of my being
my lover
a final goodbye
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow
Your poems are so very vague in what they are telling the reader, Its a good thing, makes to the reader think and imagine what you could be saying.
My take on it is that you are getting to a point were close isn't close enough, you want the love, need the love but distance prevents you from doing anything solid
"someone like you
someone distant
so far away
yet so close"
The final line "A final Goodbye" To me, I don't think its what the common meaning would be, reading the rest of the poem I believe that the final goodbye is in fact a way of saying "I don't want to say goodbye, I want to stay" Which, if true is beautifully written
Wonderous job as per normal hun
Neko §
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