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(Contest) Child

Innocent Eyes
Beautifully Broken
Alone

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    So sadly expressive and deep... x


  • notorious
    May 7, 2008

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    Dark and intriguing.
    I do think you could have used a comma after 'Beautifully Broken'. It just makes it flow better.