Constant conflict
comes
carrying a carat.
Compulsive; thinking he’s chief.
Carbon copy is all he is.
Cold and clandestine,
concealing cloudy coercion.
A contest entry
- Pick-A-Letter by Kelli Marie.
1800 points, ended May 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love feedback, good or bad. I just want to get better so give me honest opinions
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switch flip
with a stenciled occupation on a third column trundle, control is lost, clearly and permanently. the compunction of your alliterary method is done sharply and with full force. ~ EZB
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fantastic my friend
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Wow! Now see...I've tried to do poems using only one letter and suddenly everything inside my brain comes to a screeching halt! lol You've done beautifully here, however, and have made it look so effortless. This is the sign of a good writer
I really am impressed, Chrissy Love, Lane
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"carbon copy is all he is". i love it! very creative with the letter "c". good luck in the contest.
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Very well written. You did a very nice job with your letter of choice. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
Kelli
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