Thoughts,
words
flying viciously
in my
twisted,
tormented head.
Silence came long ago
smothered the screams,
to forever stay.
Author notes
Only 19 words, hope that doesn't affect it to much, only one off what it should be lol
background credit to Kari--Kaleidoscope
picture credit for contest -- http://darkartists-inc.deviantart.com/art/R-U-N-84952318
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A contest entry
- 10/20/20 PIF Quickie... You know you wanna do it!! by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended May 7, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You have penned a great poem with only a few words. Wonderful imagery.
Take care,
Sandy
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Thank you Sandy
Cin
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Wow
This is something. Scary dark write that is for sure. You did a fabulous job on this though and well deserving of a trophy. You have a wonderful wide range of poetry you write for. This is impressive. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me.
Much Love
Your Aunty
Kelle
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I try to be varied in my genres etc...Thanks Aunty Kelle
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I like this a lot. I can see why this won a trophy. Your imagery is strong in this piece. Well done. Quite dark too. Keep writing.
All the best
Wayne Leon
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I like dark an dimagery as a break from love hehehe
Thank you
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Wow, this is such a great write. Hells bells, what a picture. This poem is perfect for it. Well done for winning the trophy.
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what a pic is write, glad it inspired some how hehehe, thanks darl
Cin
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I know this torment well!! Excellent take on the prompt.. thank you!
(19 words is fine lol)
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I hate to say I do..not from abuse but form the mental illness..the amount of times it has silenced me..gee's
lol
a great pic darl
Thanks
Cin
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This was a beautiful take on the prompt. I love your background by the way!! Good luck in the contest
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Thanks Bella
My friend Kari made the background
here is here her link if your able to use backgrounds etc, she has a few for everyone, as long as you make mention to her of course
http://allpoetry.com/-kaleidoscope-
Cindy
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