Poured out from
heart's depth
Sweet and sour
am I
Author notes
Prompt: Soul's ketchup, 10 words
(hehe.. yup, that's me)
In a list
A contest entry
- I won gold in a Quikie by crimsondew.
700 points, ended May 7, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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heheh it is so perfect.Congrat's on the silver
Cin
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Great ten worder and grats to you on the silver cup! Simple and delicious!
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Oh I think we all contain a fine mix of both too.
Some, a bit more sour than others. 
Very creative thought. Well done! Congrats, again, for the silver.
Love,
Ashley
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Great take on the prompt hun! You have done an amazing job with this! wow! Congratulations on the silver!!
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Congrats on the silver. Love your take on the prompt. Keep on writing.
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When I read the prompt I had to restrain myself from laughing. I love this take on the prompt! What else is there to say other than
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Silver again....hmmm...got to disagree here this is how you see yourself to the way you want to be?
Wonderful write...but is it you?...I think maybe...maybe not....only you know for sure... to me you are a smile on a sad day..an ice cream on the beach..you are Jacks...a vision in words..my twin...my understanding...
Me
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EXCELLENT!!
Congrats on the well deserved Silver! (I'm surprised it wasn't Gold)
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Sour? In YOU! NO! I refuse to believe it. All sweetness and bunnies.
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Congrats on the silver!
Wow....I second below, don't think I'll ever look at it the same way either! Such a unique take on the prompt...what I wouldn't give for five minutes inside your muse! An awesome write hun Congrats on the silver 
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I'll never think of ketchup the same way. Well done!
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Excellent
This is such a great take on this prompt. Congrats on winning Silver
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Congratulations on the silver drinking vessel, it will look great beside the others on your shelf!
Ten sweet and sour words...well done.
Love
Sue
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LOL OH MY GOODNESS. You are a tasty piece of tangy sweetness, my sweet freak. Jeez, nicely done, dear. Write on. One.
Dez
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This is an excellent take on the prompt, well done and congratulations on winning the silver trophy. This was brilliant.
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Sweet, and sour...like the tangy Kiwi gal that you are.
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Lol the very end made me laugh when I read it I believe that a lot of us are like that! lol Well done on the silver!
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hehe... yes I think we all have a bit of sweet and sour in us.. lol
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lol funny
i love you mum
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ooh nice auntie
i love you
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yes , you ladies are ALL sweet and sour
congrats on your silver ..
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Brilliant, amusing, and kind of yummy
Soul's ketchup--HAHA! How inventive, hilarious, and random.
The entire poem flows so well in its mere 4 lines, and since I know what you're talking about, even funnier. The "poured out" and the "sweet and sour" could be taken both literally and metaphorically...brilliant write, and a well-deserved Silver that could as easily have been a Gold trophy...
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Wonderful as always, Congrats on the silver!! You go girl!
Linda
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lol you're really into the quickies these days aren't you?
i liked this!
on a different note i love sweet and sour stuff lol
mmmmm..
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I found it quite amusing......if a little sour....lol....short sweet and to the point.....great poem
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hehehe...
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Aww, haa - way too cute You never cease to amaze
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Excellent
Aww, what a great choice of ten words. So well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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kiwigirljacks
hehe nice take of the prompt Kinda made me giggle lol Good luck with this in the contest.
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lol love this...we are all a little sweet and sour on occasion blessings always~ Trisha
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This is really beautiful...
Thank you for entering my contest!
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PERFECT!!!!!!!
great job here best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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