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Taking a Chance

Measured breaths,
Walking slowly towards a certain fate,
Knowing that as soon as I topple off the cliff of familiarity,
I will hit the ground...

hard.

Close my eyes then open them,
fidget,
twist,
stir.
Boldness and courage flee my mind and
cold,
hard,
terror remains.

Step forward then back, hesitant and cautious, willing this to be over I...
approach the dangers lurking in wait.
I step into my deepest fears.

A tiny invincible bubble of hope slips into my mind.
That tiny voice that keeps telling you to go on.
I step into the Stygian Darkness of menace.

Empty
Nothing

The monster under the bed doesn't exist after all.
No need to call daddy, just the desire to hop back into the soft covers
and

sleep.

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i hope this is good

A contest entry

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  • liduen silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    congrats on the bronze!!!!


  • BluesMan gold member
    May 12, 2008
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    Awsome write for one so young I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck

    This is a really cool line!
    I step into the Stygian Darkness of menace.


  • StarIlluminated
    May 11, 2008

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    Niiiiceee this poem is soo awesome! I love the flow and all those poetry termonology things. Nice write!
    *KT*

  • liduen silver member
    May 8, 2008

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    You hope this is good? Believe me, its good! I love the title and every single word. This is a very powerful peice...great job! (Fried Rice would be proud )