something always stops me from you
and its not fair
we may not be able to see it
but its there
i know you at least have to feel it
feel that force that's keeping us apart
i know its there
we have to break it
we have to make our love stronger
i know you can do it
i sorry,but we cant be
its just that inadvisable window
keeping us
from each other
Author notes
this is not my best but its ok!
A contest entry
- Invisible Windows by Kari.
475 points, ended May 12, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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I like this! The background is kind of blinding, but once you get past it the poem is really great. I love the title...it is definitely something I can relate to. Great job!
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There are a few things that can be changed but other then that this was very deep. Thanks for your entry
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