Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Beautiful Fate

Living our lives,
full of debt and deep pain.
Searching for sun,
through hardening rain.

We twist and we turn,
in suffocation’s threat.
Forever healing,
from fate’s constant debt.

But always we search,
For a light in dark’s time.
Always we find,
Love intriguing and divine.

For like no other power,
love stands alone.
Individual and free,
not bound to a throne.

Love is a gift,
from lord’s heavenly gate.
And who could resist,
such a beautiful fate.

A contest entry

Any lines your hated.. maybe liked??

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • kitty23
    June 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Great Write

    i got so many emotions reading this is was great to read a peice that has meaning to it.
    this is very well written and it is excatly what i want good write that has emotion put into it.
    i have to say i love them lines that said
    "Love is a gift,
    from lord’s heavenly gate.
    And who could resist,
    such a beautiful fate."
    thank you for entering my contest and sharing your beautiful poem with me and my co judges!
    keep up the great work

    Kitty23



  • Margaret Denham gold member
    May 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    There was an almost spiritual feel to your words as if you were writing about a higher form of love but at the same time I could still relate to the more earthly form of love.

    Thank you for your entry and best of luck in my contest.

    Margaret


  • crazymomma
    May 9, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    WOW! I really really like this one. I love the story of loves endurance through it all. The rhyme flows nicely


  • The Unknown Poet1
    May 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this is very pretty with a nice easy and fast pace welll done! and good luck in the contest.

  • graffiti
    May 7, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Such a beautiful fate, indeed. I love that last line!

1 - 6 of 6