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Lost and Found

I moved to the desert
to forget about
the world,
bought myself
some cowboy boots
and threw away my heels,
found a Mexican
named, Ylario,
and made love with him
fervently.

 

I taught myself
how to drive

a stick shift
pick-up truck,
and wrote poetry
on my porch
naked
while the stars
kissed my shoulders.

I learned how
to make enchiladas
from an Indian
with green eyes,
read books by authors
I never heard of,
drank tequila
with a splash of hot sauce,
and watched rattlers
dance with their shadows.

Cowboys taught me
the two step
on sawdust floors
under neon lights,
while their women smoked
and gossiped
across the pool tables,
mostly about me
but I wasn’t a threat
in plain sight,
and once I even saw God
stroke the breast
of a mountain top.

I moved to the desert
to forget
about the world,
but discovered

another one

instead,

and this is when

I learned to pray again...

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  • Birgitte silver member
    May 10

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    "and wrote poetry
    on my porch
    naked
    while the stars
    kissed my shoulders."
    I love and adore those lines, as they to me represent a true idyllic night! I also really love the ending stanza, where you say that you find a new world there. I've been to a desert once, and it is quite magic. Probably just because it's so different from everything else us western people know. Good job on this!
  • I think He lives way out there in the dry places...so we have only to open our eyes, or close them, to find Him...Love this write...the flavors, the colors, the sounds and the people...Only word I didn't like here is 'fervently'...kinda stumbled over that one...maybe ardently, or spiritedly...just a thought. Of course making love to a mexican named Ylario...hey, any ole way you want is fine by me... ...Peace, Rhonda


  • TN.Joe
    May 9
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    Beauty-ful words, painting a sunset as big as heaven.
    Joe


  • nordicsky silver member
    May 8

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    Wow Lane,
    I enjoyed this one. I love the harsh beauty of the desert and you brought it to life. My favourite image was,

    “and watched rattlers
    dance with their shadows.”

    Thanks for sharing this.
    Love, Peter

  • Impressive. I loved this line:
    'I even saw God
    stroke the breast
    of a mountain top.'


  • Jersene silver member
    May 8

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    sometimes we need a change of scenery to really appreciate what we know as every day. I love this one!

  • Ah, you make even the desert sound terribly romantic. You breathe life into a barren place. Great write.

  • ea
    May 8
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    NIce to see you again, milady ♥

    I could do with some desert rat time myself.


  • breedluv silver member
    May 8
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    Hmmm.....this makes me want to go to Texas. Great write, Lane!

  • Yes, the desert does possess a distinct character and peace all its own does it not. I've spent a lot of time in many different deserts all over the world, but never really enjoyed them. Loved this Lane, truly serene and intrinsically beautiful.

  • amazing...

    I am rarely struck speechless..but wow. Vivid images which took me places. That lucky Ylario... and that even luckier mountain top. Thanks Lane, I needed to escape...

  • This is rather amazing, Lane. The hot, dusty, on-the-edge images are a metaphor for a complete metanoia, leading to a final epiphany - a total surprise! - a spiritual end to the journey. Wow.

  • I love this....especially because it reminds so much of a similar time in my life...lol

  • Arzab
    May 7

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    This is beautiful, Lane. Wonderful imagery. I especially liked the ending. It seemed to convey a feeling of renewed hope in life. Like, even when all hope seems to be lost in life and people may not know where to turn, if people make a change in their surroundings maybe they can find hope again in life. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

  • These last two lines are like an ending oasis:
    "...and this is when
    I learned to pray again..."

    Paul


  • JohnnyD gold member
    May 7

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    Wonderfully constructed-
    Sorta like peeling an onion-
    To describe escape-
    And the finding-
    Of a life-

    I live in the desert-
    But never made love to Vlario-
    (Thank God!) :)-
    But I have had three-
    Latino girlfriends-
    Over my years-
    And the worst of the three-
    Was wonderful-

    None had green eyes-
    All brown-
    But one thing about-
    Latin lovers-
    Is that they appreciate-
    Being appreciated-

    And you know-
    What I mean-
    Olivia, Carla and Audrey
    Were their names-
    Affection was their game-

    I’ve always liked Latin women-
    Perhaps my name in a past life-
    Was Jose’?-
    Who’s to say-?

    Think it’s their black hair-
    And dark eyes-
    And that look-
    They give you-
    From the kitchen-
    When they think-
    You’re not looking-

    Rattlesnakes…..yeah-
    Seen many-
    Met more-
    Diamondbacks-
    Ridge nose-
    Sidewinder-
    Arizona black-
    And several more-
    But-
    The one to avoid-
    At all cost-
    Is the Mohave Green-
    Neurotoxic-
    All the others-
    Are hemo-toxic-?

    As for the Latin women-
    Passionotoxic-
    In more ways-
    Than a man can dream-

    And here it is the sixth of May-
    Missed Cinco De Mayo-
    And a Latin date-

    I should be beat-
    Like a rented mule-

    Ya think?

    Aribbbaaaaaa!!

    *rose*

    len

     

  • Love, C


  • zochit2me gold member
    May 7

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    Love it

    All of it...



    Becky

  • My Lady

    I love your life and how you share it.

  • Mhm.

  • This glorifies the country, that's for sue. ^^ It's beautiful. And the imagry(sp) is amazing.


  • ariosto gold member
    May 7

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    I spent some time in the Big Bend area of Texas and the 4 corners as well. there is no country like it. It is as elemental as the sea, so I see how you identify with this place. It is a sculptors country inspite of the colors. A country defined by forms.
    I see you all naked and dusty out there, in a bar called
    the Double Dee on the southside of Marfa, the flying saucer capitol of the world.

    yeah

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