Never thought this would happen to me,
Never thought be i'd 20 and pregnant,
Never thought i could feel so invicible,
Just never thought it would be me
But now it is true
6 more months and i'll have a little one,
So many emotions i have
So hard to express them,
I want to scream and cry,
I want to run and hide
I want to wake up'
And it will just be a dream
But it's not
And soon I will have another life to care for,
A life to support and provide the best for,
So scared am i that i will fail
So afraid am i that i can't do it
But hopefully god will give me strength
To let me handle it
god will give me every thing i need
To raise the miricle he blessed me with.
me and my sister got raped in a alley a couple blocks from my work. I lived my sister didn't. a couple months later i found out i was to have a baby i have no idea who the father is.
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The events were unfortunate. Condemnable.
Focussing on the poem. It feels like a vent for your emotions.
Howver, if you could treat this poem as a preliminary sketch and improve upon it. Aidding the description with metaphors would help an imagery. -
Sometimes things happen to us and we have no control over them...
I felt really sad to know what happened to you and your sister...
You managed to survive the tragedy...
and I'm sure you've got the strength to deal with the situation...
Tare care of yourself and the innocent soul inside you...
I wish I could do anything better than merely praying for you and the new soul!
Love...
best wishes!
Gaalaxy2
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this poem is very powerful and amazing. The emotion jumps off the page.
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Wow! This is powerful, everyone is afraid to be a new mother. Especially in the way that it has happen to you. I bow to you for keeping your baby. I really am sorry you lost your sister in this. Maybe this was a way for her to still be with you. You know? I am sure it was hard on both of you & I do not know the hole entire situation but I am here for you to talk to me anytime. I really am sorry that I keep missing you. In love & Light...Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa~~
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thnk you i was scared at first but now i'm not afraid only problem is now is i don't know the father
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This poem is very wonderful and detailed. I love it. I'm sorry to hear about what had happened to you, but every new life is a blessing. God will grant you strength and if you wish ever for a friend to talk to I'll be here. God bless you always and keep up the excellent work.
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