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Do you know I am Here

Do you Know I am here'

I walk right past you'

and you don't give me the slightest look'

How do I express the felling of love to you'

Its nearly inpossible'

when you don't give me the time of day'

I try so hard to impress you'

but you never seem to notice'

making small talk but you
just won't have it'

I sent you that flower on valentines day'

But was to afraid to put my name'

I don't want to come right out and say I love you'

  But you just won't take the hints'

I don't even think you notice me'

Author notes

Hello I am glad you made this contest finally a chance to let this out this poem is based on true events

I hope you like it

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Comments

  • piccola
    May 7, 2008

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    This gets the feeling of unrequited love across, but I think with some well placed line breaks it might be much stronger. Also there are some spelling mistakes so you may want to take advantage of spell check.

    In the first line, spell check probably can't discern the difference, but the word here should be know and not no.