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Emptiness

Silken silence
      embeds my soul.
Weaving webs
      to capture my heart.
Drapes of madness
      cover lightly,
conjuring prisons for darkness.

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YOUR PROMPT:

"Rocking chair without a dreamer
A wooden swing without laughter
Sandbox without toy soldiers
Yuletide without the Flight
Dream bound for life."

[from "Meadows of Heaven" by Nightwish]


mind is lost(lol)

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  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    This is beautiful, and I can feel the sadness just seeping through your heart and into mine. Well done, and good luck!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    oh... I see the folds

    This was wow.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 7, 2008
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    This is a nice take goodluck


  • esroddo silver member
    May 7, 2008
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    Not at all thats wonderful write

    I love the dark version of this. Excellent. Good luck LISA


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Hello, Hello

    Good luck!

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