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lost in the dark,
i'm looking for the light

blinded by ignorance
showered by over coming intellegace

the light is so bright
its amazing & then it leaves

everyday starting the same
everyday day ending in pain

where is the happiness?
where is the sinful bliss?

how the tears fall as rain
not releaving me only leaving tear stains

my checks so dry
from the long hours i have sat and cried

they beg and they plead
please be happy again

no one seems to notice the pain
if they do maybe they don't care....

i came into this life with no knowledge
now i left and left behind a shadow with no memories.......

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  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 8, 2008

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    great write poet and differnt take then the others so far... seems most are thinking green on this lol... i was with you on the pic.... but to each their own... hugs poet and great write... good luck in contest...