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Solitude

Living life in solitude.
The darkness that kills even the blackest of souls.
Can you see me? Can you hear me
in the stifled darkness of a crowded street?
Can you hear my silent cries of pain?
Can you see the non-existant tears piercing my face?
Can you see me? can you hear me
in the stifled darkness of a crowded street?

Author notes

I'm not sure when I wrote this. I think I was twelve and very emo. I again, do not know where the inspiration for this one came from.

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  • Hate-And-Pain
    May 9
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    A great write indeed, beautiful yet dark. Well written and good flow.


  • ucancallmereal
    May 9

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    woahhhh... when you were 12?? its so good im suprised!
    i loveeee oh so much the lines, "Can you see me? can you hear me
    in the stifled darkness of a crowded street?" they were just so, simply and honestly put. great write!


  • Olivia33
    May 7
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    A good expression of isolation.