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The Willow

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A frozen shadow in the twilight
Rising sun cautiously illuminates
She stirs, like a frozen statue
Thawing to the earth's new warmth

She walks with respectful dignity
Not to awaken the sleeping giant
Her frail silhouette at once quickens
As she approaches the Willow Tree

The  girl reaches the mammoth being
Stands under the protective branches
Staring up as though in a trance
Nature listens in awe as she speaks

Condensation forms pearly orbs of moisture
Caused by the heating sun of a new day
Creating precious drops of morning dew
Along the elegant, drooping silvery leaves

Glistening like a multitude of diamonds
Some fall off leafs’ tips to the ground
Magical beauty and such a wondrous scene
She gently touches the smooth lingam

Her long radiant and soft golden hair
Curling over sweet,  delicate shoulders
Midway down to the curve of her back
She is wearing a long, simple white smock

The Willow stands alone owned within itself
This Tree is its own Teacher and Master
Eternally it stands ancient, proud and grand
A shelter of paternal love's protective embrace

Thin, elongated fingers, emerald-speckled leaves
swooping  down to softly kiss earth's moist ground
Touching it engulfs the world's essence and truth
In a perpetual sadness  and ever-lasting embrace

With a special bag of treats in her fragile hands
She feeds all the precious animals of the wood
For the Willow Tree is home to many creatures
Including squirrels, owls and other kinds of bird

The little girl sits at the secure base of the tree
As tiny sparrows come down to greet her from nests
She feeds the squirrel who sits contently in her lap
As all the birds squabble for the crumbs that are best

I saw this beautiful scene every day from my window
The Willow Tree stood in the meadow behind my home
Often I was tempted to speak to the mysterious child
Something always held me back, to leave her alone

As though I would interrupt a most sacred thing
And then I got distracted with my long work day
Eventually, she always climbed up into the tree
Disappearing into the caress of its weeping branches

I knew not where this little girl came from
but this was how she spent her long days
It went on for a few hot and humid summer weeks
Then, the icy chill of Autumn swiftly came in




One cold September day I no longer withheld
And I brought her a cup of warm chocolate milk
a blanket to relieve the cool air and a cookie
She sat there shyly and shook her head  “no”

I attempted to speak, but she remained silent
And I set the cocoa and cookie beside her
I said, “maybe another time we can talk”
And I gently covered her with the blanket

There came a morning when it was raining
I looked out my window as usual for the girl
The sky was oppressive with dark churning clouds
A fierce wind howled unceasingly through the woods

The branches of the Willow swayed to and fro
In the storm's powerful, relentless driving force
Yet, It stood there proud and as strong as ever
No force or power could uproot that mighty being

Heavy Sheets of water came cascading downward
Making visibility for me extremely more difficult
I strained to see through my foggy window pane
And finally discerned a figure of the little girl

She quickly climbed up the tree and disappeared
I bundled myself up to go out and fetch her away
No child should endure such a miserable storm
I would spirit her away to stay with me for the day

When I got to the tree to my unbelievable amazement
An astounding scene came upon me, as though a dream
Up in the tree the little girl sat serenely protected
And she had sprouted the most lovely fairy wings

Surrounded by the warm, eternal embrace of branches
The Willow Tree was her family, home and hearth
All of her animal friends lovingly surrounded her
They were all singing one song in praise and mirth

A Golden ball of light glowed and surrounded them
Enveloping them, keeping out the cold and wind
They all were safe in a protective, paternal shelter
From what ever the brutal harsh storm tried to send

I walked back to my own home in humbled awe
Thinking of the girl and the mighty Willow Tree
And the  incredible Spirit Angel that I had met
With the wondrous transformation I saw that day




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By Kareneisenlord (Karen Eisenlord)
Copyright May 7, 2008 All Rights Reserved

Photos are through the courtesy of "Photobucket."



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  • Very interesting poem; wonderful take on the prompt!


  • Blue Rew silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    I see such beautiful connections here as your
    story reaches out to transmit ripples into
    Maa's world! Brilliant telling that transports
    the reader on several levels. This seems to be
    real magic making itself known. I am so happy
    you came to share this special tale with Maa
    and in turn; send some mystical and small miracle
    her way. Blue


  • maa gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    I am speechless ...
    are you sure that this is just fantasy ? I believed every single word in this breathtaking story you so lovingly recited here ...
    I loved every single line, every single word, and all the love you have invested in your wonderful poetic offering ...

    something just happened : I had not seen my blackbird-baby durga since yesterday evening, and thought that she might have fallen prey to a cat ... (she stayed with me for 3 weeks and I set her free a week ago) ...
    and suddenly, while writing my comment on your poem, my husband shouted "durga, durga ! marion, come, I think she's back !" I ran outside and there she was sitting, seeming a bit tired and not really responding to me as usual ... but, not far, what did I see ? a very handsome blackbird-male, singing his heart out ... now, I think this might be her fiancé ! it seems that those birdies get mature quickly and build their nests right away ... who knows ...

    so isn't this a "miracle" - in response to your miracle-poem ???

    I still can't believe it ...
    I told you : your story IS REAL, because I believe it and that's why the fairy has blessed me now in this way ...

    maybe I'm a silly little girl "who needs to grow up" (for some ), but, honestly, I really don't mind ...

    wow, I'm curious to see susan's response to it all now !


    marion


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      May 9, 2008

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      I'm so glad that you like it, my precious friend. Yes, it is pure imagination. I often have visions and dreams that I write about, but this was my fantasy.

      Since I was a child, the Willow Tree has always been very special to me. I have always identified with the Willow; it's strength even in the face of adversity; and it's seeming perpetual sadness.

      I wrote a lot as a child too, and this poem is taken from a theme in a short story that I wrote about a Willow Tree, the little girl and a store-keeper. In the orignial story, the little girl is a disabled orphan, and the story goes off into an entirely different direction. In this poem that I wrote for you, I took it into this fantasy direction.

      That is really something about your little black-bird Durga. Reminds me of the baby black-bird that I adopted once. The fun part was teaching her to fly. I was so proud of her when she used her beautiful wings! I would just gently toss her up and she practiced that way several times- gliding and stretching her wings out. Then, one of those times, she did it! Like magic.

      Every character in the poem I wrote for you is an aspect of ourselves, and of course, everything revolves around the Willow Tree - which in my poem/story is the Tree of Life.

      There's more to it, but this is one of the levels, which I am sure you already realize. Enjoy! Blessings!


  • Rheea gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    This is so lovely, absolutely. If it were me I would be honored. You did an outstanding write here I loved it from start to finish.

    • kareneisenlord gold member
      May 8, 2008
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      Thank you my sweet friend! You have always been so kind to me. Blessings!

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