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Fatal

Unrequited love, how bitter the sting.
It's gentle, deadly touch reaches almost everything.

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This was written when my boyfriend Brad was wayyyy high and was screaming at me telling me how much he hated me and how he was just using me and how I was stupid for thinking he loved me at all and that he could never love someone like me blah, blah, blah ...

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  • Hate-And-Pain
    May 9

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    Few words if used well, can have an amazing emotional impact. You choose your words well here, and even though its short its strong.