I never thought I'd feel this way
Nor would I see you like this
But please listen to what I say
For your arms I really miss
The dimples that surround your smile
And the brown of your eyes
Its what keeps me happy all the while
I just feel as if I could fly
The feel of your tender embrace
And the scent of your clothes
Gives me a feeling, simply hard to place
Filling me with love no one else knows
Your soft tender lips I love to kiss
The sounds of your heart as it beats
The warmth of your body, pure bliss
And the joy when our eyes meet
All the encouraging words that you say
And the whispers of love that I've heard
Just makes me love you more everyday
So I leave you with but 3 more words
I love you
Author notes
I wrote this to my bf who I am very in love with. Let me know what you think.
A contest entry
- A lil somethin somethin(Please read updates if you havent! Sorry for any inconveneces) by DogTagz-TheJalapeno.
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What do you think? Give me an honest opinion please.
Comments
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I can Identify with you in this poem, I used to feel the same way even though I still lov him with my all. He lost that kloving feeling so I wish you luck and wish you the best.
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wow realy good good job keeep up the good work nd good luck
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Awww. That was sweet. Good luck on the contest!
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sweet
I loved it. It made me do an "AHHHHHHHHHHHHH" . Keep up the good work.
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Thank you
Thats very sweet of you to say.
~Kisses & Roses~
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WOW!
that is very good but check the spelling on the first line, I think its misspelled but its your poem you know best. Its very good I wish I had that but I am wishing that they will see, but this is about your poem. I'm pretty sure he will love it.
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Thank You
Very much for letting me know of the mistake, You are indeed correct I do need to fix that.
~Kisses & Roses~
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