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Bradley

Excuse me, Mr. Soft Lips?
Kiss me again.
I hate to admit it,
you are my weakness.
Excuse me, Mr. Smooth Skin?
Caress me again.
The way you touch me;
I melt inside.
Excuse me, Mr. Blue Eyes?
Look at me again.
With your arms around me
i feel complete.
Excuse me, Mr. Perfect?
Remember me?

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Yeah, I wrote this for my boyfriend. It's not like he forgot who I was or anything, but he hadn't been acting the same anymore. Didn't touch me the same, kiss me the same; it was starting to get to me. So I wrote this. He never read it, but it helped to get my emotions out.

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  • Dienush Greeters member
    May 7

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    "Excuse me, Mr. Soft Lips?"
    Wow, this poem is soooo cute. And I can really relate to it. I hope things will work out for you and your boyfriend, I think things can always improve if people want it badly enough Keep writing

    ~Diana