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A Long Walk [gold]

A long walk
          across
  that bridge of shame

Forgivness...?
          or love-
    goes down in flame~



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Author notes

Prompt: "I set our bridge on fire, but I could not burn it down..." In 15 Words

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    May 18, 2008
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    That's profound.
    Well done and congrats on the Gold.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    Bravo

    Love this write, wonderfully expressed in few words!
    Thanks for sharing here, and congrates on the Gold sweet soul.

    -Timothy


  • KayJay
    May 8, 2008
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    WEll deserving of Gold! Lovely take on the prompt!
    Ken


  • unmasked synergy
    May 7, 2008
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    great take on the prompt Cia
    you even managed to rhyme with just the 15


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 7, 2008

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    Sensational!! Love this take.
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila

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