Love is a feeling
that must be built
As strong as the dealing
it could turn to silt.
Love is truly what you make it
it can cross the open sea
You can make the bit
that brings you to me.
Lending a helping hand
catching you when you fall
Walking barefoot in the sand
with love you can have it all.
Author notes
Option #28 What is love to me?
A contest entry
- ~Help Me Celebrate 600+~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended May 12, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please don't critique this.
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I love the last two lines..they are indeed incredible and revealing the essence of the love time and time again...
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Wow! This is so sweet and beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. Best wishes and much love. -Nessa
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wow
wow simply and sweet
yet says everything about it at the same time
beautiful and totally true -
aww so sweet... veyr nice!
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this is full of emotions
sweet poem great descriptions
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I like the way you have described love, my opinion on love at the moment is quite harsh, so we don't get into it, but I love what you have wrote here and I like the rhyme you have used, love goes so well with rhyme.
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very soft and touching write of love`s feelings. many books written on love, I suppose it has as many definitions. well done. success in this contest.
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love is this and so much more
happy to read this today...best to you in the contest~ blessings always~ Trisha
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I LOVED IT
Your amazing
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Amazing! Got to be my favorite of yours yet. Spoke with a great word choice, and great flow and imagery. Loved it! Great job!
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awe this was beautiful great job. I haven't been able to comment in a while but I am back.
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Sweet
Very sweet words here, brother. Good to see you writing again.
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grr i clicked the applauds
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aww. good to know you're writing again, my friend.
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