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Ever present

Missing image

Sunrise to sunset
you are there
attacking my thoughts
distracting my attention
your presence reviled
and yet a level of comfort
familiarity and acceptance is there
though unwanted
I have no choice
forced association
mandated acceptance
resigned acquiescence
you are my
tormentor
guide
companion
my ever present friend

.........pain

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 25

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    Awww. this was wonderful..
    Though it was a sad read too,
    you really took us into your "eveyday" life
    almost.. I hope that one day the pain dulls enough
    that you can live one day without it.. Or seemingly so.
    Thank you for sharing.. Best of luck..

    Angel

  • angelicfaith silver member
    May 8
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    this is really good
    i love you daddy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 8
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    Awesome write!!! Seeping darkness in here... I can relate to this so much.. brilliant ending!


  • wildfiredreamer gold member
    May 7
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    I can understand the depth of the poem, maybe not to the depth that you know it. I am sorry you hurt so much and all the time. the shape looks like a jar with a lid. you did a good job on this, though the subject is sad. Remember you are in my prayers always.

    Rhonie


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    May 7

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    oh daddy :S this is such a strong write your starting lines and end line such touches the deep of the heart great write daddy and good lucks

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