Truth about my heart
Hmm I don't know where to start
But heres something thats not to new
I'm very depressed, down and blue
I don't want to live
I don't feel I have much to give
But then also I don't want to die
I'm just weak and about to cry
I can't stand who I am anymore
I feel like living is such a chore
I have to go see Dr Tom in a few
If I can tell him what is true
I'm afraid of talking to him
I'm afraid I might have to commit this sin
You asked for the truth in my heart
And I think I did some in parts
But I don't think it's helped me much
The true problem with me I haven't even begun to touch
To give up and die
Or to stick around, let go and cry..?
Author notes
YOUR PROMPT~FROM THE HEART CAME TRUTH
In a list
A contest entry
- Truth.. Quote Prompt.. by Angelflower.
713 points, ended May 25, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm not sure what I want I guess....IDK...
Comments
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Oh.. this really brought tears to my eyes..
I really loved this.. there was so much pain..
You did a wonderful job and expressed your emotions so well.. Bravo.. I hope that things get better soon.. and I know that life can be hard and things just seem like they can be too much at times.. But you always have someone here for you..
thank you very much for sharing ..
Angel
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awww sweety, hugs for ya! im here for you ok sis, dont be blue I love you!
nice write and g'luck
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I feel your pain. Sad, but a wonderful write. to you and I hope you feel happier soon. Sometimes crying is the best release. Best of luck to you.
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Well done.
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I hear you honey Its your AP Grandmother
I sometimes just break down and release all the frustrations and fears within me through tears I cry and get it all out for it seems to cleans my soul .I know you are afraid to open up to your dr I can feel it but if in your heart you truly feel you need to tell someone then he is your dr let go of it and he will help you get past these times.You are holding back and thats what is making you build up these feelings. Tell yourself I am going to get through this and free myself of all the thoughts and memories that haunt me.I will lay them on the table and he will help me find the me I have lost over time and bring back the life I so yearn for . For me and my husband and son together we will create the life I need and want . I love you honey and I want you to know I am sorry I WAasnt on when you messaged me .I was tending my sick dog but Im here now .Talk to me in the morning when you get on I will be here for you.Love Your APGrandmother Patty
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Wow!!! In sooooooo many ways, I am sorry to say, I can relate to this one, especially at this moment in time. What a great job you did on this read!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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