I said I wouldnt let you go even when you left me on my own
But guess what?
YOURE GONE, IM GLAD, IM FUCKING THROUGH WITH YOU!
Goodbye- have fun with your white trash girlfriend
WERE OVER, IM DONE!
Ive never been more happy
I now see your ture colors- theyre black and cold
Youre such a heartless bastard
I didnt deserve this pain just like you didnt deserve me
Im too good for you
SO LONG, FAREWELL!
Never to hear from you again
Im so glad this is the end
A contest entry
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wht ya think?
Comments
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*lot [[sorry]]
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good write. i liked it a lote
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lmao its ok. and ty hunni
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Good luck in the contest. I've felt like this before, but it was a long time ago, and with a really huge piece of crap boyfriend. Thank god I'm more picky with who I date.
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thanks, lol thts good! noone deserves to be treated badly
xoxo
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Hey this poem is good. It is full of emotion.
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thank you! yea im full of it haha cute dog
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Thanks for the cute dog comment. He is cute. I like how I ended up taking a picture of him and a squirrel in the background.
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lol ur welcome, haha tht is funny!
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Whoa. Ok, take a step back. Breathe. Relax. Lol. Ok, nice write. Loved the anger, very emotional. Great job.
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haha thanks. i kno venting rocks lol
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The way you put it makes me see how truely hated this guy is to you i wish i could say all of this to my ex but hey we cant all be this amazing again i love the way you put it so vividly if i could put it like this to my cheatin cold hearted ex maybe i wouldnt hurt everytime i look at old pictures great poem
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yea, u tend to hate a person when they drag you along 4 9 months and constantly break up with you, crazy fights where they scream @ you, cheat constantly, and only want sex...but im over it
lol and go ahead and tell u x bf how u feel, it will make u feel so much better inside. thank you 4 ur comment hun 
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you said this so wonderfully i really like the pain and detial you have put into this, i wish i could say this to my ex, he was not a nice person, i like the flow and i like how you have enfisided those lines with the caps it really gives style and wonderful deatial, keep up the great writing, -Amy
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thank you and im glad u can understand my pain and where im coming from. and if u have sumthing to say to sumbody u shoud go 4 it.
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im really sorry that you guys broke up...but he really didnt desever you you desever better...and kats my friend tells me this all the time
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its ok..time will heal my broken heart. and thank you 4 the applause, and tht is good advice hun
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Excellent
Excellent way to vent your feelings! Glad to see you are moving on my friend
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thank you.
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this was so deep! i loved every word of it! it was never out of place..but did u and ur bf break up????
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thank you....yea we did
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woah girl
dwn girl. very nce very strong
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haha thanks. im so over him glad u like
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woah so strong. nice emotions!!
im glad you kicked that sorry person out of your life
if they treated you that badly they dont deserve it
it was a wonderful write truly showing what you felt great job!!
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thank you. im really glad u liked it!
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