holding on but what for
looking at the broken shattered door
blood flowing down my arm
not worrying about the harm
im trying to hold on but what for
i dont think that i can do this any more
seeing what ive done to you
knowing that i didnt think it all the way through
loosing my mind
thinking about this
i dont know why i even did this
there is nothing left for you to see
there is nothing left even to me
leaving the past behind
and seeing you is all but kind
all there is, is nothing left
A contest entry
- Darkness Dwells PIF! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
450 points, ended May 9, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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we'll never die alone
juggalos will carry on
swing our hatchets if we must
each and every one of us!!
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aww so sad hun,,, whoever this person was should read this its amazing and heartful great one
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whose this about love
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sadness kk, who about? Mr. Corey Larnard?
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Good,Good.Good.
This is realy realy good I love your rhyme scheme.
And the flow is so smooth.
The imagery was great. I love your work shows a real talent Good luck in the contest.
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this had very good flow and imagery. I loved it!
<3,
Chloe -
wow this is great,
i love the rhyme and flow,
best of luck,
love Kitty x
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