Bounded
(Others lust)
You (your fingernails)
Cuts me
(Deep…
Beyond my calcium
Beyond my rivers)
All of you
And all evil
Streams out
(Out of veins)
(Out to cleanse)
It anoints
(We) (Us) (We)
Anoint me anoint
Anoint you anoint
[And it all comes
(Out and out)
(Out and out)]
[Evil (no evil)
Be my evil!
Be me
Be me
Me (my)
Good and my
My evil]
Love me my evil
My love
(Good)
Lust me
(And be)
Take off my skin
[And be]
Take me down
(Down in, again)
My evil
[And be]
My evil
My evil
Be me
Be me
Be my
Good evil
For I was you
And I’ll be your blood
(Bleed on…bleed on me)
I will love you
[Evil of good }
[Evil of light }
Evil = you
I
And
I will
Don’t
(Thought)
Of it as bad
When (we)
You are evil
You are good
To me
(To you too)
I love you, good and bad, I love you
Author notes
Its been almost 10 years since i wrote a so called 'dirty pretty' actual when i started writing these, they weren't even called that...i don't think they did have a name when i was writing these...lol makes me sound old. this one is part of the last batch i wrote circa 2001-02 enjoy.
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty :] by XfaceXdownX.
300 points, ended May 14, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It would make a great song. Love your work btw.
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its so good "Lust me...Take off my skin" so good i can see the picture in it *smiles* it is very good! i like your ues of repitition!lol i like it very sensual..^-^
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wow i love this poem!
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Good luck in the contest. You deserve gold for this amazing poem!
Spreading the love,
Miley -
A very interesting poem... Being new, I have no idea what DP is but I think I'm beginning to (LOL). Whether or not it's DP, I found it very complex and darkly beautiful...
Ken
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this is one of the best i read so far in the contest. good luck
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this is kinda sexy n a distorted way. gr8 work.
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ha ha very nice write steve
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