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Daydreams (Limerick)

I don’t want to sound immature
but my fantasy life is the cure.
No need for blue pills
to extend my thrills
and never a thought premature.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    LMAO!! You are killing me today!!! Hysterical... oh and by the way.. my ex works for the 'blue pill' company if you ever need any HAHAHAHA

    This was cute!!


  • Lucy.
    May 7, 2008
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    Ahh, daydreaming, yes, that's my other one.


  • Erozay
    May 7, 2008

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    it is a cute lymric i like it its abit evil to though if u think about it but all in allits a cute little ryhme


    • KayJay
      May 7, 2008
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      Only a bit... it's funnier when you're my age (LOL).